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morning clicked, two seraphim gulls


hid to spring the new soul


on the damp dew of the morning beach.


i curled awake, tempting the morning,


to beckon my cold and dewy frame;


to tease the engulfed pull of the itch


of the cold sea, to my churning, burning


living warmth- to quell it%26#039;s qualms


of the new day breaking.





resisted haystack-cotton lovers arm.


that i a frond wreathed in


a cubicle of frost


hung a breathing weight


from the hilt of the cracked door.


nooked having my roots shift


tall trees and skin sore, sore light.


(doves cooed blunt hymns


from the breast-bolted pane.)


praised like pharoahs


in the coal sieving night!





great hushes bespoke the hingeless,


(frame, rootsripped to wake)


songs, salte and strewn


lie there hung without


while, new leaves grew, mushrooms in the rot,


the ever-sea turned in its blink.





really didn%26#039;t spend as much time as i should of, knowing its copulation arose from intoxication.

Poem recently published?
So I sat here frustrated


Since I came to sh*t


[but only farted.
Reply:It is good, just not great, it needs somthing diffrent to make it stand out, try adding a comicl line at the end that sums it up, then it would be very good and almost great.



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